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She's name is Ola. She lives in Opole. Ola moved to this town in 1994. She has got a dog. Her dog's name is Roxi and her dog have two years old. Ola is 15 years old. She has got one sister and two brothers. Her sister's name is Ania and brother names is Olaf and Artur. Her sister have 19 years old and her brothers have 17 years old. Ola is student. She is very ambitious an clever. Her favourite subjects are polish, history and science. Ola is polish. She was born in 7th April 1993. Ola is blonde and she has got blue eyes. she has long an straigt hair. She is medium height and slim build. Ola usually wears long t-shirt, jeans and sport shoes. She likes meet with friends and goes to the cinema. Her favourite move it is lejdis and she often watches this movie.
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W podstawówce lepsze pisałem;P Pod względem gramatycznym to dno.. Ale nie martw sie widzę, że jeszcze można to popsuć np: "Dog's name is Roxi and the dog has two years old" lol
Za dużo pojedynczych tutaj jest zdań.
Przede wszystkim , źle zaczynasz. Gdzie jest wstęp ?
I will talk about my friend ... I want to tell you something about one person ...
;)
HER name is Ola. She lives in Opole since 1994. She has got a two years old dog. Her dog's name is Roxi. Ola is 15 years old. She has got one sister and two brothers. Her sister's name is Ania and brother names ARE Olaf and Artur. (albo her sister have 19 years albo her sister is 19 years old) and both of her brothers are seventeen. Ola is A student. She is very ambitious AND clever. Her favourite subjects are : polish, history and science. Ola is polish what is more she was born in 7th April 1993. She has got long and straigt blonde hair and deeply blue eyes. She is medium height and slim build. Ola usually wears long t-shirt, jeans and sport shoes. She likes meeting with friends and going to the cinema. Her favourite MOVIE it is "Lejdis" and she often watches it.
Her name is Ola jest poprawnie
Tak samo jak My name is...
She's = She is
is two years old
are Olaf and Artur (l.mnoga)
Her sister is 19 years old and her brothers are 17 years old.
to bym napisał w innym szyku, jak juz piszesz o jej włosach to najlepiej tak:
She has long light, straight hair and she has blue eyes.
She likes meeting with friends and going to the cinema.
nie używamy dwóch czasowników w formie osobowej:
lubię spotkania (rzeczownik odczasownikowy) z przyjaciółmi; a nie: lubię spotykam się z przyjaciółmi.
Her favourite move is "Lejdis"
raczej "trainers" bym użył ale to co napisałas ujdzie.
Ogólnie tragedii nie ma, trochę problem z gramatyką, ale taki tekst napisany na maturze pisemnej by przeszedł...
P.S. Nie czytałem odpowiedzi na temat co by sobie mętliku nie robić, napisałem tak jak mnie uczyli.
She's name is Ola. She lives in Opole. Ola moved to this town in 1994. She has got a dog. Her dog's name is Roxi and her dog is two years old. Ola is 15 years old. She has got one sister and two brothers. Her sister's name is Ania and brothers names are Olaf and Artur. Her sister is 19 years old and her brothers are 17 years old. Ola is a student. She is very ambitious and clever. Her favourite subjects are polish, history and science. Ola is polish. She was born in 7th April 1993. Ola is blonde and she has got blue eyes. she has long and straigt hair. She is medium height and slim build. Ola usually wears long t-shirt, jeans and sport shoes. She likes meeting with friends and going to the cinema. Her favourite movie it is 'lejdis' and she watches this movie very often.
najprawdopodobniej tak powinno byc 
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Tak to powinno wyglądać w miarę uporządkowane, choć powinnaś bardziej ubarwić to opowaiadnie czyli po prostu lać wodę;)
I would like to tell you something about my friend Ola. She is 15 years old and she was born on April 7, 1993. She lives in Opole and moved to the town in 1994. Ola is a student ans she is very clever and ambitious. Her favourite subjects are Polish, history and science. She is blonde and has got blue eyes. Her hair is long and straight. She is of medium height and has a slim figure. Ola usually wears long t-shirts, jeans and trainers. She likes meeting up with friends and going to the cinema. Her favourite film is "Lejdis", which she likes to watch very often. Ola has got a sister and two brothers. Her sister`s name is Ania and her brother`s names are Olaf and Artur. Ania is 19 years old and both her brothers are 17 years old. Ola has got a dog. Its name is Roxi and is two years old.
Narobiłeś podstawowych błędów ... ;)
to this town
przepisane bez ładu i składu zdanie niepoprawne gramatycznie
to powinno być zawarte wcześniej - to jest jej rodzina, zaraz za miastem powinno być o tym wsponiane. Co do tego psa, też można to zgrabnie połączyć a nie znów przepisywać to co ona w sumie podała ;)
Dziecko zapoznaj się z podstawowymi zasadami gramtyki języka angielskiego to nie będziesz więcej wypisywać takich głupot jak teraz. Co do kojelności podawanych faktów w opowiadaniu to wcale nie trzeba wspominać o rodzinie na początku. A waracając do Twojej wersji opowiadania to tam jest dopiero mnóstwo byków, więc zalecam szybki powrót do książek a po zdobyciu odpowiedniej wiedzy dopiero proponuje głoszenie swoich herezjii;)
