angielski - biography

witam.;)
Dla Was to może się wydawać banalne ale ja z angielskiego totalnie leżę
Muszę napisać biografię; Jules Verne 120-150 słów ;)

Jules Verne
[1] His name was Jules Gabriel Verne. His was author. He was know as the grandfather of science fiction. Most people love the stories 'Five Weeks in Balloon' and 'A Journey to the Centre of The Earth'.
[2] He was born in Nantes in France in 1828. He studied law. He was work as Stockbroker. His hobbies was sailing. He was inteligent. For some years his attentions were divided between the theatre and work.
[3] He married Honorine de Viane in 1857. He had son. His son was name Michael. He had three boats. His books it: 'Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Sea', 'Around the World in Eighty Days', 'From Earth to the Moon'.
[4] Sir Jules Gabriel Verne was a very talented man. He was died 24 March 1905 in Amiens in France.

proszę o poprawienie, jakże licznych błędów w tej pracy
z góry dziękuję ;)

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He was an author

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he worked albo was working

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hobby, w koncu liczba pojedyncza.

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ja bym napisala ''He was an inteligent person''

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his attention was divided (jego uwaga byla podzielona, nie uwagi)

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he had a son.

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he named his son Michael

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nie it tylko are

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bez died.

@agoosiaaa:
kurczę, dzięki ;*
uratowałaś mnie ;) ehh takie głupie błędy

Konto usunięte: kurczę, dzięki ;* uratowałaś mnie ;) ehh takie głupie błędy

kurcze... tutaj, w ostatnim co ci poprawialam i napisalam:

Konto usunięte: bez died.

mialo byc ''bez was''
tak ma brzmiec:
He died 24 March 1905 in Amiens in France.

dzięki ;*

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nie ma za co :)

nie za dużo tego "he"?

Jestem na poziomie początkowym. Nie powinna się przyczepić :)

Trzeba było wejść na angielską Wikipedię i skopiować ten wstęp, co zawsze dają .


Chyba nadal jest z tego znany, więc 'is known' ;).